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Last updated: April 3, 2013
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Syracuse Veterans' Writing Group
- About the Group
- Members
- Meeting Materials
- Members' Writing
- Videos
- Resources
"There's a reason soldiers make good writers. Under all the stress, they've got to remain composed, have discipline, pay attention to detail, make situational observations as if your life depended on it - and then communicate effectively with your fellow troops." —Andrew Carroll, founder of the Legacy Project
Welcome to the Syracuse Veteran's Writing Group website.
The Syracuse Veterans' Writing group is open to all veterans and their supporters The focus of our group is on writing nonfiction accounts or "true stories" of life in and out of the military.
Veterans of all ages, branches of the military, and conflicts are welcome. You need not have any prior experience with writing, just a desire to write your stories and share them with others.
Our group meets once a month on Saturdays from 10 a.m.-12 noon on the Syracuse University campus in the Writing Center, 1st floor, H.B. Crouse. Refreshments are provided, and the atmosphere is casual and relaxed. The bulk of our meeting time is focused on sharing and commenting on group members' writing. There is no cost or fee associated with the writing group. Just bring a notebook and pen or and be prepared to do some writing.
Writing group sessions focus on:
Learning key techniques for nonfiction writing
Drafting your stories
Sharing your stories and offering feedback to other group members
Encouraging each other as writers.
Polishing and preparing your work for publication.
The group is co-led by Eileen E. Schell, Chair of the Syracuse University Writing Program, a writing teacher and writing group leader for over 20 years and Ivy Kleinbart, a poet and writing teacher at Syracuse University.
The group meets once a month on Saturdays from 10 a.m.-12 p.m. in the Writing Center, 101 H.B. Crouse on the Syracuse University Campus. The meeting dates are announced a few weeks in advance via the Facebook group (Syracuse Veterans' Writing Group) or via email. Please email Eileen E. Schell to get on the email list or join the Facebook group.
Free parking is available in Quad 1: http://wrt.syr.edu/syrvetwriters/quad1parking.pdf
"Soldiers' Stories": The group was recently featured in a The Eagle article.
The Vets' Writing group was mentioned in a recent Daily Orange article on the rising number of student veterans at SU.
Email eeschell@syr.edu or call the Writing Program at 315-443-1083 to sign up and hear more details about meeting times and meeting locations.
Member Bios
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Dawson J.W. Brown, born in 1955, in Gloversville, New York, grew up in the Elmira, New York area. He graduated from Elmira Free Academy in 1973. He then served in active duty in the United States Navy from June of 1973 to June of 1977. Following Boot Camp in Orlando, Florida, he trained at Treasure Island, California as an Electronic Warfare Technician, and received his duty assignment aboard the U.S.S. Sacramento AOE I. He completed two WESTPAC tours, visiting countries including Japan, Hong Kong, Singapore, the Philippines, Iran, and Pakistan. For Dawson, the Navy really was a vehicle to "see the world" and become a man. He has many vivid memories of his Navy experiences - some treasured and some a bit disturbing. Dawson returned to Elmira after the Navy, and received his Bachelor of Science Degree in Education from Elmira College in 1982. Later that same year, he began his 28 ½ year career with the New York State Department of Correctional Services as a Stationary Engineer in Watertown Correctional Facility. He worked the 11-7 shift in the powerhouse for nearly 6 years. He earned his Master's Degree in Elementary Education from S.U.N.Y. Potsdam. while working full-time. He then taught Adult Basic Education I at Watertown Correctional Facility for a time, until he took a promotional position as a Senior Stationary Engineer at Cape Vincent Correctional Facility in 1988. He was promoted again in 1989 to Plant Superintendent C at Riverview Correctional Facility. In 1994, he was promoted to Plant Superintendent B at Auburn Correctional Facility (the State's oldest maximum security prison), where he worked until 1999 when he was offered a promotion to Deputy Superintendent of Administration at Gowanda Correctional Facility. In 2000, he became part of the start-up team for the State's newest maximum security prison, Five Points Correctional Facility, as the Deputy Superintendent of Administration. In 2005, he returned to Auburn Correctional Facility as Deputy Superintendent of Administration, where he served. until 2007, when he became First Deputy Superintendent at the famous Sing-Sing Correctional Facility. He soon took over as Acting Superintendent (warden) of Sing-Sing. He held that position until July, 2009, when he became Superintendent at Groveland Correctional Facility. He retired from State service in March of 2011, and is now making the most of his retirement - golfing, reading, playing chess, enjoying time with family and friends, and exploring his interest in writing. He joined the Syracuse University Veteran Writers' Group to assist him in developing and sharing memorable stories from his days "in the service" and in corrections. He resides in Syracuse with his wife Pat, and two sons, Alexander and Cameron.
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Fred Floyd is a Navy veteran and medic who served during Operation Desert Storm. He is still actively engaged in the medical field, giving physical exams at Military Entrance Processing facilities. Fred is fascinated by military history and the stories of veterans in his family.
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Ginger Gunnip was born in Milwaukee, WI in 1984. She enlisted in the Army and was stationed in Northern Iraq for fifteen months from 2007-8. She is now a Bio-engineering major and writing minor at SU. Since a young girl, she has always kept diary/journals to write through life's experiences whether good or bad. Her uncle, who has been in the army since he was 18 told her that "the military is a million dollar experience you wouldn't pay a penny for". She would like to share that experience through her writing. Personally, her view of the military has changed a lot since joining. The army is a unique society that functions sort of like a dysfunctional family. To be part of that family is both an honor and a struggle with miscommunication being one of the biggest downfalls; similar to any other family in America but on a much larger scale. Ginger is married and has a young son. |
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Elizabeth Hall, “Lisa” is a Keuka college graduate and employee at the VA Medical Center. She served 16 months in Iraq at the beginning of the War in 2003. Through trials and tribulations she has grown to become an advocate for her fellow veterans and a supporter of PTSD and MST. Elizabeth is the daughter to Joseph and Michelle Hall, who have been married since May 19, 1982. She was born October 22, 1981, and raised in the City of Syracuse as the oldest child of three, with her sister to Melissa Williams (Married to Marques and has two children Ketaylee and Nathan) and Bradley Hall Sr.(has a son Bradley Jr). In the military Lisa was a Signal Support Communication Specialist and during her time in Iraq worked with the 403 Civil Affairs Battalion. She is a HUGE Syracuse basketball fan and enjoys spending time with her friends and family. The stories Lisa writes about are often untold to most of the world, some come from great battle wounds, while others come with great laughter and joy. In reading along she hopes you get a better understanding of the female solider and also the real life wounds and stories the Iraq war really leaves us with. |
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Frank Hobitz enlisted US Navy upon graduation from H.S. at age 17. Navy training in aviation electronics maintenance. Starting Pitcher for Navy Station Baseball Teams: Memphis, Alameda, Moffet Field. Competed against College, Military, and Minor League Baseball Teams. Volunteered for Korean duty with VF23, USS Essex. Appointed VF23 Electronics Crew Chief. Supervised 12 Electronics Technicians in Electronics Equipment maintenance of 15 combat jet aircraft.
Education: University of NH, BA Economics, MBA Program Northeastern University, Holy Cross College Labor Relations, Syracuse University CBIT School, Certificates in Project Management, Database Management, SQL, Powerbuilder.
Experience in non-profit, Manufacturing, Government, Recruiting, Executive Search, Outplacement. Strengths in Turnaround Management. Position responsibilities have included CFO/Controller, Project Manager, Consultant, IT Management, and Cost Accounting Management.
Executive/Career Coach Background includes Certification as a Career Development Consultant (NACDC), Director Consulting Services, Jameson Associates; Senior Consultant, Career Advancement Group; President Innovative Career Strategies, Inc. /The Career Source. |
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Michael Rivezzo is originally from Mt. Pocono, Pennsylvania. He is the third generation in his family to serve in the military. He served in Operation Enduring Freedom as part of the Army National Guard. He is currently a senior enrolled at Syracuse University in the Whitman School of Management and is the President of the Syracuse University Veterans' Club. After graduation, he plans to attend law school. He is writing a piece on the war in Afghanistan, viewing the war through the perspective of a local Afghan. |
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Robert Marcuson was born in 1947, the first year of UFO sightings over new Mexico. Bob spent the rest of his life being told that all events have meaning and there is no coincidence. Bob is a veteran of the war in Vietnam. He maintains a web site with correspondence and writing about his service in Vietnam at http://www.gruntseyeview.com/
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Peter K. McShane is a Vietnam veteran and a graduate of SU with a BS In Zoology and an MBA. When he started writing about his military experiences in 2005, his family thought the stories were terrific, but he wanted his work to appeal to a larger audience. He began attending classes and workshops at the YMCA's Downtown Writer’s Center to learn effective use of exposition and dialog, scenes and point of view to create stories with universal appeal. Pete is working on a memoir about his life as a Green Beret Medic and its aftereffects. He has written short stories, a novella and several essays. His work appears in Ginger Piglet, Issue Two and Syracuse Intertext Magazine.
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Lee B. Savidge is a third generation soldier who retired in 2005 with active and part time military service totaling 27 years. After graduating from Rensselaer Polytechnic Institute, Lee joined the US Air Force during the Viet Nam War. After the war Lee worked a series of civilian engineering jobs for large corporations including Hess, Carrier, Niagara Mohawk and SRCTec. While at Carrier, Lee earned his MBA degree at Syracuse University. In 1982 Lee joined the New York State Air National Guard at Hancock Field, Syracuse, New York, and worked in the Bio-Environmental Engineering section of the 174th Fighter Wing Clinic. In 1983 Lee cross-trained to Aerospace Warning and Control and transferred to the 113th Tactical Control Squadron, a mobile radar unit at Hancock Field. Lee deployed with the 113th to many remote locations including the Bahamas, Italy and Portugal in support of drug interdiction and NATO programs. In 1993 the 113th was dissolved and Lee transferred to the Northeast Air Defense Sector (NEADS), Rome, New York. In 1999 Lee cross-trained to Intelligence and worked for two years at Rome Research Laboratory’s Secret Compartmented Information Facility. In 2001 Lee returned to NEADS and served in support of NORAD operations during the September 11th attacks and the conflicts in Afghanistan and Iraq.
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Eileen E. Schell is Chair and Director of the Writing Program at Syracuse University where she teaches undergraduate and graduate writing classes. She did her graduate work at University of Washington and University of Wisconsin-Milwaukee. She has worked with veterans off and on since 1986 when she helped a WWII bomber pilot edit his memoirs. For the past decade, Eileen has run a nonfiction writing group at the Nottingham Senior Living Community in Jamesville, NY where she has worked with a number of veterans from WWII. She co-founded the Syracuse Veterans' Writing Group in March 2010 with colleague Ivy Kleinbart. The group is founded in honor of Eileen's uncle Brady L. Smith who served in Vietnam for 26 months as a helicopter pilot. |
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Ivy Kleinbart teaches academic writing and creative nonfiction at Syracuse University. She received an MA in English in 2009 and an MFA in creative writing in 2007. Her work has appeared in Bateau and NoTell Motel. |
Agendas:
- March 13, 2010
- April 10, 2010
- May 8, 2010
- June 19, 2010
- July 17, 2010
- August 14, 2010
- October 2010
- November 2010
- December 18, 2010
- January 29, 2011
- February-April 2011
- May 21, 2011
- July 23, 2011
- August 20, 2011 & Incorporating History
- September 17, 2011
- October 22, 2011
- November 19, 2011
- December 17, 2011
- January 21, 2012
- February 25, 2012
- March 31, 2012
- April 28, 2012
- May 19, 2012
- June 23, 2012
- July 2012
- August 18, 2012
- September 22, 2012
- October 27, 2012
- November 17, 2012
- January 2013
- February 23, 2013
- March 23, 2013
- April 27, 2013
- May 18, 2013
Members' Writing
Anonymous
Monkeys, Bats, Jungles and Humidity by Dawson J. W. Brown
Thoughts On Veterans’ Memories by Dawson J. W. Brown
The Day That Changed My Life Forever by Larry Gene Clark, III, Guest Writer
Exhaust by Derek Davey
The Piper of al Asad by Derek Davey
Therapy Dog by Derek Davey
Able To See Everything In Front Of Us by Elizabeth Hall
August Revolution, 1968 by Robert Marcuson
Catch 17—Inspection by Robert Marcuson
Fort Carson Snowman by Robert Marcuson
Al by Peter K. McShane
Minefield by Peter K. McShane
Dispensary by Peter K. McShane
Why I Write by Peter K. McShane
On The Dole by Peter K. McShane
April 2, 2011 by Ginger Star Peterman (Gunnip)
Poem by Ginger Star Peterman (Gunnip)
Mastering PTSD by Ginger Star Peterman
Surprise Attack by Lee B. Savidge
Survivability Test by Lee B. Savidge
Writer As Witness by Lee B. Savidge
Tattoos by Ralph Willsey
Videos
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Dawson Brown

Peter McShane

Ralph Willsey

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